Millie's class has been writing about small moments: little things that happen, but using lots of detail. I like the little detail she added about Matt's job title in the middle of the Halloween story. I too will "never forget"!


"My family trick-or-treated at my daddy's work, Sprint. My dad's work has lots of cubes. He is not a director. A long time ago in October it felt exciting. I heard an evil cackle. I was scared. In a dark, black cube I saw a black witch. I was afraid again. I hugged my mom and dad. This is something I will never forget. By Millie Wachter"
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